Captured The Captive Series Book 1 (Audible Audio Edition) Erica Stevens Luci Christian Podium Publishing Books
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Blood Slave
Captured, taken from her beloved family and woods, Aria's biggest fear is not the imminent death facing her, but that she will be chosen as a blood slave for a member of the ruling vampire race. No matter what becomes of her though, Aria knows that she must keep her identity hidden from the monsters imprisoning her. She has already been branded a member of the rebellion, but the vampires do not know the true depth of her involvement with it, and they must never know.
Though hoping for death, Aria's world is turned upside down when a vampire named Braith steps forward to claim her. He delays her execution, but Aria knows it's only a matter of time before he drains her, and destroys her. Especially once she learns his true identity as a prince within the royal family; the same royal family that started the war that ultimately brought down humankind, reducing them to nothing more than servants and slaves.
Aria is determined to hate the prince, determined not to give into him in anyway, but his strange kindness, and surprising gentleness astonish her. Torn between her loyalties to the rebellion, and her growing love for her greatest enemy, Aria struggles to decide between everything she has ever known, and a love she never dreamed of finding.
Captured The Captive Series Book 1 (Audible Audio Edition) Erica Stevens Luci Christian Podium Publishing Books
I'm going to be splitting my review into two parts. Read on & you'll understand why.First of all, everyone is right when they say that the storyline itself has great potential. I read all four books in the series. (I know a 5th book came later, but it focuses on a different character & should've been considered a spin-off, as that is exactly what it is.) I read them all because I saw the potential in the storyline & I was curious where it would all end up.
The author has some great story ideas but focuses too much on sharing the feelings of the two lead characters CONSTANTLY. When you have three paragraphs & the first and third are nearly identical in describing how the characters are feeling - it gets frustratingly redundant for the reader. It seemed that the majority of the time we are reading of their feelings, it's nearly exactly the same as they've felt every other time we were told how they felt. We want details on what the characters are doing & seeing with the feelings being woven with those other details. SHOW us how they feel, don't tell us ALL the time. There are times when it's better to describe it the way she did but not ALL the time in EVERY book in the series.
Now the second part of my review. The editing. The author did not need to thank Leslie Mitchell from G2 Freelance editing at all. In fact, I hope the editing was FREE. Because there was NOTHING done - and if Leslie did in fact put in some hard work, then I'm flabbergasted at the thought of what this looked like BEFORE editing. Here's why.
When the word should have been plural (vampires) it was very often typed in the possessive (vampire's). This happened with the word funerals & many other words as well. Not just in the first book or two, but throughout the ENTIRE series. I made faces & cringed IRL when I saw this happen over & over. This was the grammatical error made most often in the series.
The word "grated" was used far too often to describe someone speaking angrily. It was completely overused & at one point in one of the books it seemed that words by main characters could only be "grated."
Often times, I had to reread passages to know WHO had spoken inside the quotes. Why? Well, because the author had written a conversation between two or three people and a break in line with quotes would not always signify that a new character was speaking.
And when character A was speaking, the text after that quote (in the same paragraph - no new line created) would describe the thoughts or feelings of character B. It was quite confusing & happened every now & again throughout the series as well.
These are just some of the main issues I had with the grammar.
So while I commend the author on a great idea with an interesting storyline, I have to ask her to find a better editor. One who had at least a firm grasp on the English language. Also, an editor for content (not just grammar & spelling) would make this go from a good story, to a great story!
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Captured The Captive Series Book 1 (Audible Audio Edition) Erica Stevens Luci Christian Podium Publishing Books Reviews
Captured by Erica Stevens
First in the Captive series
3.5 stars
Aria lives in a world where vampires rule. The humans are either low class workers who serve vampires, rebels living in the woods hoping to overthrow the reign of the vampires, or blood slaves. Blood slaves are rebels who are captured and sold to the highest bidder for consumption and torture. Aria has been captured and she knows that this will be the end of her life. Braith is the prince of the vampires and he saves Aria before she is given to a monster, but she knows that she has really been saved because the prince is known for being lethal. Vampire stories are not my favorite thing in the world anymore. I used to consume only vampire stories after discovering Twilight and before branching out into different genres. Something that does appeal to me now is slaves/ kidnapped dark romance stories. I love them because of the psychology behind it. Do these characters really love their captor or is it the famous Stockholm syndrome taking hold of their minds and they are trying to survive through psychological means? I think it’s so interesting. I’m usually drawn to darker stories that don’t have paranormal elements like Comfort Food and Nine Minutes and for the younger audience Stolen A Letter to My Captor. I love dark contemporaries and those three novels have all earned five star ratings from me because they were so compelling. This novel is paranormal and that makes the whole Stockholm syndrome fly to the forest the Aria runs in. It can be there and it is prevalent, but this story isn’t meant to be psychological; it’s meant to be a dark vampire romance story that has a questionable love interest.
"She was most certainly more than an it, but not here, and not now."
I don’t feel guilty admitting to really like this book. I REALLY like this book, so much so that I’ve recommended it to numerous people in my daily life since finishing because it’s free and worth downloading. The writing in this obviously from an indie author. I personally don’t think that indie authors should be excluded from grammar mistakes (Commas are important, Mrs. Stevens! Learn how to use them and apply it!), but the writing flowed very well. It’s not the most wonderful writing in the world, but I was incredibly enamored with the story and couldn’t put it down. I wanted to keep reading and my nitpicky findings were quickly forgotten about because I needed to know how this book would end.
Whimsical Writing Scale 3.5
The main female character is Aria. I really like Aria; she’s brave, but also realizes that she’s incredibly impulsive and it puts her in bad situations (like becoming a blood slave). Aria is illiterate and that's an incredibly interesting character trait that I enjoy seeing and it's probably the only fully fleshed out thing about Aria. She doesn’t have much character development beyond that. We are told things about her, but I don’t have a connection to Aria. She’s a character whose world I’m currently enjoying being a part of, but I have no deeper connection to her beyond that.
Kick-Butt Heroine Scale 3.5
The main male character is Braith. I don’t always particularly like Braith and his actions are very gray at best, but I can’t deny that I’m incredibly invested in his storyline with Aria. Like damn, I feel kind of like a fangirl about their relationship, but I don’t LOVE their relationship. Do I ship it? Of course, but I ship it because it’s the primary source of tension in this book. I don’t have a deep connection to Braith, but I do feel like I know him a little more than Aria. Maybe it’s because his secret actually shocked me and I wasn’t expecting (view spoiler)
Swoon Worthy Scale 3.75
The Villain- I think I’m supposed to dislike everybody except Aria and Braith and that’s pretty much the case. This book isn’t meant to have a thought-provoking and intense villain; it’s meant to be devoted to the developing relationship of Aria and Braith and I’m sure the sequels will have more of a “villain” or group to take down.
Villain Scale 2
Seriously, I didn’t like one single character outside of Aria and Braith. Maggie had potential, but she was just there and didn’t contribute anything. All the characters I’m supposed to like, I’ve begun to dislike since picking up the sequel and that’s pretty much skewed any previous notions of the characters in this book. One area that Stevens really lacks in is character development. It’s just not there. The characters just exist and move around to compliment the story. They are more like paper dolls than realistic heroines and heroes.
Character Scale 3
Overall, this novel has a lot of flaws, but for being a free book this novel is superb. Seriously, freebies usually don’t hold up as well as Captured did and that’s why I think I enjoyed it so much. The thrill of finding a new freebie that was actually good (it’s been a long time since that’s happened) and the storyline had one of my immediate book pickups, so there were a lot of pluses for me personally. Do I recommend this? Sure! If you want a fun and free read that is just meant to be fun and nothing beyond that then I highly recommend picking this one up.
Plotastic Scale 4.5
Cover Thoughts The cover is cliché, but I kind of dig it. Maybe. It’s pretty meh.
I'm going to be splitting my review into two parts. Read on & you'll understand why.
First of all, everyone is right when they say that the storyline itself has great potential. I read all four books in the series. (I know a 5th book came later, but it focuses on a different character & should've been considered a spin-off, as that is exactly what it is.) I read them all because I saw the potential in the storyline & I was curious where it would all end up.
The author has some great story ideas but focuses too much on sharing the feelings of the two lead characters CONSTANTLY. When you have three paragraphs & the first and third are nearly identical in describing how the characters are feeling - it gets frustratingly redundant for the reader. It seemed that the majority of the time we are reading of their feelings, it's nearly exactly the same as they've felt every other time we were told how they felt. We want details on what the characters are doing & seeing with the feelings being woven with those other details. SHOW us how they feel, don't tell us ALL the time. There are times when it's better to describe it the way she did but not ALL the time in EVERY book in the series.
Now the second part of my review. The editing. The author did not need to thank Leslie Mitchell from G2 Freelance editing at all. In fact, I hope the editing was FREE. Because there was NOTHING done - and if Leslie did in fact put in some hard work, then I'm flabbergasted at the thought of what this looked like BEFORE editing. Here's why.
When the word should have been plural (vampires) it was very often typed in the possessive (vampire's). This happened with the word funerals & many other words as well. Not just in the first book or two, but throughout the ENTIRE series. I made faces & cringed IRL when I saw this happen over & over. This was the grammatical error made most often in the series.
The word "grated" was used far too often to describe someone speaking angrily. It was completely overused & at one point in one of the books it seemed that words by main characters could only be "grated."
Often times, I had to reread passages to know WHO had spoken inside the quotes. Why? Well, because the author had written a conversation between two or three people and a break in line with quotes would not always signify that a new character was speaking.
And when character A was speaking, the text after that quote (in the same paragraph - no new line created) would describe the thoughts or feelings of character B. It was quite confusing & happened every now & again throughout the series as well.
These are just some of the main issues I had with the grammar.
So while I commend the author on a great idea with an interesting storyline, I have to ask her to find a better editor. One who had at least a firm grasp on the English language. Also, an editor for content (not just grammar & spelling) would make this go from a good story, to a great story!
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